Okay, so, I’m taking a dramatic literature class, and 20% of my final grade involves some creative project. My choices were either a ten minute play, or do a setdesign/costume design for one of the plays we read about. And since I can’t draw or design for shit, I chose the easy way out.
As I never really wrote something like this before, I want some people’s advice before I submit it. Oh, and yes, maybe it was inspired by a certain game. But I hope it stands well enough on its own. Also, the formatting might screw up a little in the transition, but everything you need should be here.
“The Light at the End of the Tunnel.”
Cast of Characters:
ALAN SMITHEE: A man in his early thirties, he is coming to terms with his death and what awaits him. He might have been a nice guy in life, but the foreboding fate ahead has him nervous.
THE CONDUCTOR: A somewhat portly man in what appears to be his late forties, maybe early fifties. He moves like a man who feels no fatigue. He is solid, and unshakable, knowing everything about how to run his train, and offers little help on anything else.
Scene:
A single train car, antiquated in decor. There is a booth set in the center against the wall. On one side there is a door, leading to another car, and against the backdrop, there is another door, from which ALAN enters and leaves. There is a small stand or peg from which the clipboard can hang.
TIME:
In this place, time is immaterial. However, it is assumed that it is set in modern day, due to several references made in the course of the play.
Scene one:
(Interior of the train car. The set is empty. There is the sound of a train whistle, and a voice calls from offstage.)
V.O. CONDUCTOR
All Aboard!
Enter ALAN SMITHEE, a man in his early thirties, looking very confused. He is wearing modern clothes, and seems unsure about where he is. From the opposite side, the CONDUCTOR appears, dressed very sharply and holding a clipboard. He is busy looking at it as he suddenly notices ALAN there.)
CONDUCTOR
Ah, here we are. Last car.
(CONDUCTOR Calls out of the door he left.)
Okay, Joe, start her up!
(there is another whistle, and suddenly, the sound of a train engine picking up speed. The sound fades to the background, as ALAN speaks up.)
ALAN
Umm, excuse me, but-
CONDUCTOR
Just a moment sir. Need to fill this out.
ALAN:
Yeah, but… where am I?
(The Conductor looks up from his clipboard, and sighs. He sets it down and looks at him.)
CONDUCTOR
What’s your name, mister?
ALAN
Alan… Alan Smithee.
CONDUCTOR
Tell me, Alan… you ever been big on mythology?
ALAN
What?
CONDUCTOR
You know how everyone always talks about the Grim Reaper? Guy with a scythe, comes to harvest people when they die, bring them to judgment?
ALAN
Yeah, so?
CONDUCTOR
And you know how the Greeks would have you pay for the same guy to ferry you across a big river to the land of the dead?
ALAN
I don’t see how-
CONDUCTOR
And you know all those stories people tell of ships back in the days that were bigger than ferries, carry lots of people, especially sailors?
ALAN
Look, this is all fascinating, but what is the point of all this!
Conductor
What I am saying, mister, is you’re on the Train of the Dead.
(ALAN stops, staring at him with shocked silence. The CONDUCTOR continues, not pausing a beat.)
Yes, sir. Soon as that great Golden Spike tied the Continental Railroad together, this train was made. Heh, not that the spike stayed there for long – how long you think a spike made out of gold would last? But soon as it was done, this old girl was commissioned. Course, now everyone says we need to upgrade to airplanes, say they’re the wave of the future, but I don’t see the point. After all, can’t get much more metaphorical than a train for death. After all, it is the final journey, can’t stop it, and everybody has to ride sometime.
(After The CONDUCTOR picks up his clipboard and continues to write in it, ALAN finally speaks.)
ALAN
So… I’m really dead?
CONDUCTOR
'Fraid so, sir.
ALAN
But… there must be a mistake. I can’t be dead.
CONDUCTOR
No mistake, sir. You said your name was Smithee, right? Is that with a ‘y’?
ALAN
No… it’s two e’s. Look, if you really ARE the grim reaper, shouldn’t you know this already?
CONDUCTOR
I never said I was the Grim Reaper, sir. Don’t got a scythe for it. I’m just the Conductor. And I don’t know anything about you, sir. I ask everybody for their name, and deliver it to the guys at the end of the line.
ALAN
By… By that, you mean… like St. Peter?
CONDUCTOR
Could be, sir. Why don’t you sit down, enjoy the ride. I have to go see about the other cars for now.
(The CONDUCTOR turns to leave.)
ALAN
Wait! Don’t go!
CONDUCTOR
Sorry, Sir, have to finish my rounds-
ALAN
Please!
(The CONDUCTOR pauses at the door. ALAN Continues.)
Don’t… Don’t leave me here. I don’t want to be alone, but I… I can’t face anyone else. Can’t you just…
(The CONDUCTOR takes out his pocket watch, and checks the time. He sighs and walks over to sit down.)
CONDUCTOR
Very well. I suppose I can wait a little bit.
(ALAN sits down across from him, relieved.)
ALAN
Thank you. …So, I’m really dead.
CONDUCTOR
Yes, sir.
ALAN
And… I’m really heading to Heaven?
CONDUCTOR
Could be, Sir.
ALAN
Wait… so you mean, I might not be going to Heaven? Am I going to Hell?
CONDUCTOR
Couldn’t Say, sir.
ALAN
You can’t say a lot, can you?
CONDUCTOR
There’s no need for that, Mister Smithee with two e’s. After all, I could be doing my job, but instead, I am here with you because you asked me to.
ALAN
You’re right. Sorry.
(There is a slight pause in the discussion. Suddenly, the lights flicker on and off.)
ALAN
What was that?
CONDUCTOR
Oh, don’t mind that, sir. Just the lights messing up. Always do that as we go through the tunnel.
ALAN
The lights mess up?
CONDUCTOR
Oh, yes. You think just because this old girl’s part of the afterlife, it’s kept in pristine condition? Huh! If that happened, you think we’d keep this same decor for the last century and a half?
ALAN
Well, I… kind of assumed that was part of its charm…
CONDUCTOR
Oh, yes sir. Very charming. And never mind the fact that I tell them they need to fix these things, but even in the afterlife, seems like everything starts to run on tape, string, and bubble gum.
ALAN
And, by “them” you mean… (points upward) The guys upstairs?
CONDUCTOR
Well, it wouldn’t do much good petitioning the engineer, would it?
ALAN
Well, I mean… we’re talking God, right? With all his angels and stuff?
CONDUCTOR
Couldn’t say, sir. Never been up there myself. My job’s here on the train.
ALAN
So you don’t know? You just… drop people off without ever finding out who they’re going to meet?
CONDUCTOR
Well, sir, Do you think that other train conductors need to know what people are doing when they get off? All we need to know is where’s your ticket, and when are you getting off.
ALAN
I don’t have a ticket.
CONDUCTOR
Well… I’d say sir, in a very metaphysical way you’ve already presented it, as it were.
ALAN
What? …Oh. I guess I understand. But… how can you take me where I’m supposed to go, if you don’t know where that is?
CONDUCTOR
Ah, that’s no problem, sir. See, we always take you where you need to be. There’s no margin for error, after all. Can’t let a passenger miss their stop.
ALAN
But… look, going back for a moment… when you said the people up above, that’s God, right?
CONDUCTOR
Well… I suppose that’s the name, sir. It’s a little hard to really explain.
ALAN
(sitting back, a little overwhelmed.) I was agnostic, you know. Didn’t really know if there was a God or not.
CONDUCTOR
Well, sir, you got enough proof for you now?
ALAN
It’s pretty convincing, I have to give you that.
CONDUCTOR
Could be hallucinating all this, you know. Meet plenty who are convinced they are still in the hospital, just dreaming about all this.
ALAN
Well… no, I can tell. This isn’t a dream, is it.
CONDUCTOR
Couldn’t begin to explain that, sir.
ALAN
No, I didn’t think you could.
CONDUCTOR
Look, sir, it might shock you to know that not everyone has the answers for you. Huh! Only one who does is the big man upstairs, they say. I’m just the Conductor, sir. I know how to run the train and how to get everyone to where they need to be on time.
ALAN
How do you know when to do that?
CONDUCTOR
Couldn’t begin to-
ALAN
-to explain. Yeah, I get it.
(A silence fall as between them, when the roar of the train wheels seems all the louder, echoing through the cabin.)
ALAN
I led a good life, you know.
CONDUCTOR
I’m sure you did, sir.
ALAN
Never married, you know. Was still waiting for the right woman to come along.
CONDUCTOR
Well, you’re still young.
ALAN
Somehow, I think my dating days are behind me.
CONDUCTOR
Well, maybe.
ALAN
I…never really was sure if God existed. I mean, I grew up Protestant, but it never really clicked with me, you know? …Do you know if they’ll have a problem with that?
CONDUCTOR
I couldn’t tell you, to be honest. We get all sorts on this train. Christians, Muslims, Jews, Hindus, Pagans, Atheists… Don’t know if even they knew if they believed it or not.
ALAN
So… so you’re saying that everyone rides this train.
CONDUCTOR
Seems that way, sir. I can certainly tell you I’ve heard a good many dialects and languages. I can give you an Irish accent, or German, French, Japanese – but don’t ask me to do that tongue-click, everyone asks for that, and I can’t.
ALAN
Darn.
(Both share a small laugh at a joke that isn’t really funny. ALAN glances out of the window.)
ALAN
Hey, there’s a light down there.
CONDUCTOR
Just means the tunnel’s coming to an end, sir.
ALAN
Oh… so that’s “the light at the end of the tunnel” you always hear about, huh?
CONDUCTOR
Very good, Mister Smithee. Most people don’t grasp the metaphor so quickly.
ALAN
The light’s getting bigger… hey, that metaphor usually means something good after a long journey, right? So… it might mean Heaven?
CONDUCTOR
Could be, Mister.
ALAN
Or… it could be fire, huh?
CONDUCTOR
Sorry I can’t tell you more, Mister Smithee.
ALAN
No, it’s fine, I’m starting to understand. Hey, I don’t have to get off, do I? I mean, what if I stay here instead?
CONDUCTOR
So you’d rather stay here for all eternity than face “the Great Unknown”?
ALAN
You don’t seem to mind.
CONDUCTOR
Well, it’s not up to me, anyway. You’d need to bring that up with the higher-ups.
ALAN
How do I do that?
CONDUCTOR
Get into Heaven, first of all.
ALAN
…So, let me get this straight. In order to stay on this train rather than risk hell, I have to first get into heaven to be able to ask to stay here so I don’t need to get off in the first place?
CONDUCTOR
That about covers it, yes.
ALAN
There’s a catch there somewhere.
CONDUCTOR
Yes, sir. The worst kind.
ALAN
Well… guess there’s no helping it, then.
(A pause.)
ALAN
Hey… you know, it’s funny. All of a sudden, I remember this old song I heard years ago. Can’t really remember who sang it… might have been Willie Nelson or Johnny Cash… one of those guys. Anyway, can’t remember much, but there’s one phrase I still remember: “And when the yard broke off, they said that I got killed/but I am living still…” Funny how those memories can come back to you, huh?
CONDUCTOR
Certainly a nice thought, at least.
(The CONDUCTOR checks his watch, and glances outside the window.)
CONDUCTOR
Looks like we’re nearing the end of the line, Mister Smithee. You’ll need to get ready to disembark.
ALAN
Yeah… yeah, okay.
(The CONDUCTOR leaves momentarily, as the engine slows, and the wheels grind to a halt. ALAN looks around nervously, and clasps his hands together to pray. The CONDUCTOR re-appears after only a short pause.)
CONDUCTOR
Well, sir, that’s it. Time for you to get off.
ALAN
Yeah, okay… I guess I’m ready. But, hey, before I go, I just want to ask you something.
CONDUCTOR
Yes?
ALAN
I’m just curious… did you ever do anything before this gig?
CONDUCTOR
Well, yes.
ALAN
What?
CONDUCTOR
I was a ship’s captain, as it so happens.
(ALAN looks startled, as if realizing what that meant. Before he can say anything, though, the CONDUCTOR starts shooing him out the door.)
CONDUCTOR
Alright, sir, you had your question. Now time to go.
ALAN
I can’t see anything from here… you sure it’s the right place?
CONDUCTOR
You know the old saying “You never know until you try?” Well, you won’t know until you step outside.
ALAN
Alright… Nice knowing you, mister.
(ALAN steps out of the door, which shuts behind him. There's the sound of a train whistle, and the CONDUCTOR checks his watch before picking up his clipboard to mark something off. As he does, he begins to sing.)
CONDUCTOR
I was a sailor,
I was born upon the tides,
And with the sea I did abide,
(CONDUCTOR starts to exit out other door.)
I sailed a schooner 'round the horn of Mexico,
I went aloft and furled a mainsail in a blow,
And when the yard broke off, they said that I got killed,
But I am living still.
(EXIT.)
(THE END.)
Anything and everything you can suggest to make it better, please say so.