Hmmm… Either the simple or the two-winged. The two-winged looks… complete, but the other one is also quite nice. The one-winged looks… how should I put this… wounded on the inside.
I like the third one the best, but then again, I’ve always liked the more angsty things. I agree with Wilfredo though, the entire sequence together makes a very strong impression.
But you wanted criticism: The first one is too plain compared to the other 2. The 2nd one looks too static and I think some extra emotion could be added to the 3rd to make it better than the first 2 (a hung head with a slightly lowered wing, as in looking down at the lost wing? It’d be melancolic/dramatic). Don’t take this like I don’t like any of them though :moogle: