Dysfunction, a new fanfic, need constructive crisism!!!

I’ll be patiently waiting.

Here’s the idea:

“Dysfunction”:Quistis decides to divulge her desire to seek out their parents to find out what they have done. They have the first fight among them right there, with Squall refusing it HARSHLY. However, mainly Quistis and the others are forced AGAIN into the ‘Dream World’.

While they seek out their parents and try to make sense out of the dreams, a man wearing a black, long light overcoat and a black cowboy hat starts to hunt them down, one by one.

And that is when they start to find out the dysfunction within their ways.

what do Y’ALL think?

Sounds intriguing. It’d definately be interested in reading it.

Sounds a little risky, but I think you can pull it off after having spent the past couple of evenings reading some of your other work.