Hear ye, hear ye!
Prometheus asked me a while ago to ask for opinions on her story Flowers Grow - which in my opinion should be read by everyone if not for the story itself then definitely as a study on how to describe stuff in minute detail - because she’d really like to hear some opinions apart from my summaries. So go have a look 
Wooooo. 
There’s nothing wrong with the grammer at all, apart from a few formatting errors, but that’s just something that happens. Characterisation is brilliant. I loved Barrett.:hahaha; I’m not really a big follower of the stories with the Cloud-really-loved-Aeris-regardless-of-evidence-to-the-contrary aspect, but I’m just picky like that.
It’s still one of the best stories of it’s type I’ve read though.
The explanatrion Sephirpoth cheats death at the beginning is a shitload better than most of the usual ones. I look forward to reading more of it.
Correction by the way, Prometheus is a he, not a she thuds down a stair My bad.