Under the Twin Moons

Hello, this is my first time posting something like this up anywhere, but this little fanfic piece (not a completed fanfic, might or might not make more to it, guess it depends) has been kind of burning a hole in the back of my mind and I’m practically rabid for feedback at this rate. So without further ado, I’ll try to post it up here and see if anyone wants to comment on it. :slight_smile: THis is my first time doing something like this so be gentle. :stuck_out_tongue: Also I’m not particularly fond of the current title, so that’s subject to change if I can ever think up something better. Whether that happens or not.

Just as a little note about the setting. This dosen’t really tie into any existing theme or game. The only bit with ‘Final Fantasy’ that it shares is things common to the games. Such as the classes (black mage, dragoon, etc) some creatures (Chocobo) and possibly other things (maybe a Cid will have to show up somewhere along the lines). Other than that, everything else is just off the top of my twisted little mind. :stuck_out_tongue: So without further ado, here it is.

Under the Twin Moons
By T-Rex

Daylight's tender caresses had long since given way in the late evening of the day, yielding to the persistent moonlight that would rise upon this portion of the world for yet another lengthy night. The first moon that always rose at night, Luna a giant that when in full cycle could dominate nearly a portion of the sky equivalent to two hands raised and placed together with fingers spread out, would shed her dark lavender glow across the land in preparation for her much smaller, but albeit no less brilliant sister, Ruby, a much smaller moonlet that always followed in her wake, but glowed even brighter with a pale pink aura that mixed with her sister's light to create a truly dazzling array. Even at night time, it rarely ever became so dark as to make it difficult to at least see marginally well. Only during the occasional eclipse of one of the moons, or the very rare occasion when both would be hidden within the shadow of the world would the night be plunged into absolute darkness, a time when person and beast alike had long since learned it was best to lay low and ride it out, for during these times creatures terrible to behold were rumored to rise from underground. Hating the light, these monsters would revel and rampage within the relative security of an entire night's complete darkness, only to return to their holes before the dawn would come again, leaving little but destruction and tragedy in their wake. Even beyond these rare nights of carnage, the world was a dangerous place, this was never cast into any doubt, as the untamed lands were rampant with monsters and wild bands of raiders that would seek to take advantage of the unwary, or even to overwhelm small villages and townships where defenses were lax. 

Nevertheless, amidst this adversity and danger, not only had the civilized races managed to carve out an existence for themselves, but to strengthen as well. There was no worry of the danger of errant monsters behind the safety of castle walls and watchful guardsmen patrolling the streets, ever wary for signs of threats to the populace safely nestled within their care. In truth, for those fortunate enough to live within these great cities and kingdoms that would be formed, the fear of the wilderness would be replaced by the fear of one's fellow 'civilized' beings, for even amongst the relative safety of the cities there would be those who prowl the streets at night, seeking the weak and unwary. The danger from one's fellow sentients comes not just from within for that matter, but without, for the established kingdoms had gathered a long history or clashing with one another, as jealousy and adversity would eventually reveal its head. Territory, honor, or personal gain, wars would be fought for these reasons and more, and amidst it all, rivalries would form, alliances would be forged and broken, and old enemies would forget past transgressions to band together against a  common enemy. The world would remain uncaring of these disputes between the civilized beings of course. Regardless of the rise and fall of kingdoms, every day the sun would rise, and every night, Luna and Ruby would cast their collective glow beneath them, and so life would go on for Decades, Centuries, even Millennia.

The small kingdom of Ceinan was no different than those that had come and gone before it, forged on the collective ideals of a group of leaders, and upon the labors of those willing to follow them, to see a dream fulfilled, and a better future for their children and grandchildren. When motivated, people could be moved to the heights of literally moving mountains it had been said. While such boasts may not be literal, the feat of carving out a successful existence for the city of Ceinan was no small task unto itself. Enterprising pioneers had met with the daunting task of finding a place to settle amidst what could best be described as a rocky desert amidst great steppes and cliffs set into great crags that at one time would have been a magnificent mountain range, only now they were little more than a broken shadow unto itself. The task would indeed have been impossible, were it not for the discovery of a rare oasis of water amidst the wasteland. An underground spring, long since left over from ancient times, had bubbled up to the surface to form a small lake, around which the founders of the city had finally settled. The oasis had the added benefit that there were several valleys set into the surrounding terrain, with surprisingly fertile soil fed by the underground streams, and allowed the growing of crops. Over time, as the city of Ceinan would grow, alliances and trade agreements would be formed with the nearby cities of Sphrom and Jalkadesh, from which caravans would bring goods and food that couldn't be made or grown off of the surrounding lands, and in exchange taking back the spoils of living within a mineral rich landscape in the form of gems and ore, as well as a surprising source of revenue in the form of chocobo eggs and meat. The terrain about Ceinan was unsuitable for the raising of typical livestock, but the chocobos were large, ostrich-like birds, that were hardy, and proved capable of scraping out more than enough food and water for themselves amidst the landscapes to not only thrive when let loose free-range upon the area, but to also survive in the wild. Their clawed feet and sure step also made them able to traverse the rough terrain with ease, thus not only were they harvested for food and resources, but despite their sometimes ornery demeanor also bred as steeds and pack animals where necessary. The rocky steppes seemed to fit the giant bird’s tastes so much in fact, that it all but encouraged them to breed, and as a result, Ceinan's royal chocobo flocks became well known as not only a producer of high quality stock, but high quantity as well. Such a valuable commodity would of course need protection, from both the elements, and those who would look to pilfer from the city's wealth, and as such, a constant vigil and guard would always need to be posted to keep an eye upon them, night or day, such duties would fall more often than not to hired guards to tend to them, as such duties were beneath the requirements of the Royal Guard of the city.

Thus did Vanz Lance find himself wondering just what he was doing out here standing on a jutting, rocky peak in the grazing grounds of the Royal Flocks, in the middle of a cool night, and not back within the warmth and security of the castle walls. This night wasn't terribly frigid, but it was cool enough that he could see his breath in the air, and the surface of his pale blue armor had become cold to the touch. This didn't matter to most of his body, as the armor was insulated and he wore a warm tunic beneath, but his helmet, fashioned into a long beak-like shape, not unlike that of a bird, or a dragon's maw, had no such protection and he found the chill transferred readily to his cheeks and exposed face, bringing a rosy tinge to them, in sharp contrast to the dark brown of his hair, typically held long, except for when he wore his helmet, at which point he had it pulled back into a tight braid that hung loosely from the open-backed design of his helmet. It was common practice that Dragoons of the Ceinan Royal Guard would wear their hair long, so common in fact that the Royal blacksmiths had taken to building their helmets to allow for such fashion statements. 

Vanz's hands wore no gloves at the moment, as he had forgotten them in the morning's rush to get suited up for daily exercises. He had only recently been promoted from Squire to an official soldier in the royal army. Despite his past record of headstrong acts, and tardiness as a student, his skills couldn't be denied, and despite some setbacks he was eventually promoted, not just to within the membership of the prestigious Royal guard, but as one of the kingdom's elite, few Dragoons for that matter! The Dragoons of Ceinan were a small group of specialized soldiers that answered directly to the king, and always acted upon Royal business, which further confused Vanz as to just why he was out here slowly freezing his extremities. It was his own determination that now that he wore the proud symbol of his homeland, he would do his best not to disgrace it. This morning he had made it on time, barely, but he had discovered only afterwards that he had forgotten his gloves. It was forgivable...they weren't a required part of his outfit so he hadn't been concerned at first. But then he hadn't expected to be out, away from the city many hours later, currently standing on a rocky outcropping and looking over a herd of chocobos, all branded with the Ceinan royal seal, while his fingers were numb with cold. He raised them to his face to blow onto them, bringing a thick mist of warm breath, and for a moment they felt better...until the mist was gone and the chill gleefully took hold of them once more. 

"That only makes it worse you know." The voice was that of Shesal san Mone, an older Dragoon in service to the city, and Vanz' superior officer, as well as his senior by forty years to add to Vanz' own tender age of seventeen. He was dressed within armor similar to what Vanz wore, with a beak-like helmet, but it was colored a pale white, signifying both his position, as well as his senior rank with the Elite few. He wasn't just Vanz' superior officer however, he was also his friend and mentor. Vanz suspected that it was Shesal who had pushed to see him through to graduation and enlistment in the Dragoons, something that somewhat troubled him, as he didn't like the idea of having only gained his position through the influence of another. But in Shesal's own words, he had learned all he could through training and more training, and now needed a little real life world experience to teach him some of life's more important lessons. With this in mind, Vanz had been that much more determined to see it through, and prove to everyone that he -was- deserving of his position and rank. 

Somehow he'd thought it might have entailed doing something a little more glamorous than this however.

"Sorry..." the young knight replied then, rubbing his palms against one another quickly as he struggled to resist the urge to blow on them again. "...they just get so numb I get worried I wouldn't be able to use my fingers if I really need them Shesal. Can't use my spear if I can't feel my fingers right?" The familiarity with which he addressed Shesal would have been frowned upon by most senior members, but out here in the steppes there was no one else around to see, and his mentor and friend didn't seem concerned enough to correct him about it. 

"Yes, well...it's pretty quiet so you probably won't be needing your spear out here anyway, this is just a routine check and all." Shesal responded, as he raised a brass spyglass to one eye, looking about the surrounding landscape. The apparent darkness of nightfall made it impossible to make out details, but one could still look to a great distance in the search of silhouettes or shapes that looked out of place. Navigating at night was rarely a problem thanks to the constant glow of the two moons...except during the eclipses, when any sane minded person wouldn't be wandering about in the open anyway.

Vanz couldn't resist the chance to voice the question that had been dogging his mind since they'd first stepped out of the city. "Just why -are- we out here then?" He raised his hands as if to blow on them again, but quickly corrected himself, and set to rubbing them against each other to get the blood flowing once more. 

Shesal smiled just faintly at the young Dragoon's frustration, but didn't answer right away, instead scanning the horizon before finally lowering the spyglass and placing it back within the specialized belt loops for it at his side. "Well, evidently -something- has been pilfering some of the Royal Chocobos as of late..." 

"...but that's a job for the Flock guardsmen, not Royal soldiers." Vanz interjected, then immediately regretted it when he received something of a glare from Shesal. He was his friend, but he was still his superior, and at times the boy's mouth got himself in over his head. "...ah, that is to say I don't mean any disrespect to the King or his orders. I guess I'm just...confused is all." 

The older knight's gaze eased off then somewhat, as he gave a slow nod. "Yes, well, it seems things have gotten a little more serious in the last few days. Yesterday, one of the Flock guards went missing as well, and nobody's seen any signs of an attack or otherwise. At first they thought it might be bandits or a few predators, but there's been some reports of Rock Hoppers traveling this way, so His Majesty thought it best to send a couple of the royal dragoons to have a look. That's where you and I come in." 

Vanz shuddered just slightly. Rock Hoppers were a serious problem, the only real threat to Ceinan's chocobo flocks, as well as the citizens for that matter. They were large, lizard-like creatures roughly the size of a man, with great crocodilian mouths full of sharp, pointy teeth. They stood on two oversized hind legs, with a pair of smaller forelimbs that reached out like small arms, all of these limbs ending in wicked, razor sharp claws, that could strike with enough power to tear the shield from a soldier's arm in one blow, then rend his armor from his body in the next, only to finish him with a terrible bite from that tooth filled mouth. The worst threat from the creatures however, came from that which gave them their name. Their hind legs were extremely powerful, and could propel them in great, bounding leaps that could cover the span of the castle courtyard or more in a single bound. Even during an attack, they constantly kept moving almost in a blur, leaping about, off of cliff faces, the surrounding terrain, anything they could land on, making them extremely difficult to hit with sword or bow. Even Ceinan's few black mages had been frustrated in several encounters with the difficulty they had in bringing their offensive spells to bear on the speedy monsters. The only fortunate circumstance in all of this was that encounters with Rock Hoppers were relatively rare, scholars believing that the creatures made their home much deeper in the Wastelands, beyond where Civilization had yet reached. They only came out this far to hunt when food was scarce within their own boundaries. After more than a few dangerous, and in some cases, lethal clashes with the monsters, the Royal Guard had decided to post their Dragoons as the ones who would officially deal with any Rock Hopper problems, simply for the fact that the Dragoons were the only ones who could possibly keep up with the beasts, and fight them on their own terms. 

"Do you think they're right?" Vanz asked then, a hint of nervousness in his voice, or perhaps excitement at the prospect of giving battle. He'd never -seen- a Rock Hopper before but he'd heard all about them, been briefed...since he would be expected to face them should they appear. 

"Maybe..." Shesal responded with a shrug. "...but even if they are, I wouldn't hold up much chance of seeing any tonight. The last few times we've had to deal with the devils they seemed to realize that we were hunting them, so they were hesitant to engage us. They can see in the dark much better than you or I as well, and if there are any in the area, they've probably long since seen us before we saw them." He handed the spyglass over to Vanz then, as if to allow the young knight to confirm this for himself. "No...our best bet would probably be to look for signs in the daylight and try to hunt them down in force. Ideally you don't want to face them at night anyway. They say Ruby's glow has a tendency to make them more bold and aggressive...and they're quite bold and aggressive enough as is thank you very much." 

Vanz lifted the spyglass to have a look, briefly having to accustom himself to the sense of seeing distant shadows and silhouettes up close. He'd only recently been using the tool, and still found it odd to be able to see things from far away like they were right next to him, but the spyglass was a required piece of equipment for his profession, essential to assist with scouting of the surrounding terrain. 

A sudden flash of movement caught his eye then, and he frowned, giving the instrument's dial a slight turn to bring it into focus. "Hey I see something moving, I think it's a Chocobo!" 

"Probably just a wild one. The local herders around here haven't been keeping a close eye on their flocks and there's been some escapes. Darn things breed like crazy in the wild and got the farmers worried about them eating up all the food. They make for some good hunting though..."

Vanz bit on his lip just slightly as he tried to make out more details, and after a few moment's fiddling, he managed to bring the object into better focus. Sure enough, it was one of the big birds, and at first he was inclined to agree with Shesal that it must be one of the wild breed, but a moment later he caught the distinct and unmistakable shape of a banner hanging from the bird's neck. "No, wait...it's one of the Royal birds." 

"Are you sure lad?" 

"Positive, it's got a banner on it's neck and everything. What's it doing away from the rest of the flock? Maybe we should go retrieve it?"

Shesal sighed, raising one hand to rub at the curve of his chin. "That's the herder's job, but the damn fools have been practically asleep at their posts lately. There's going to be hell to pay if someone gets wind of this." The older knight gave a moment's consideration, then finally gestured with one hand to take back the spyglass. "Allright lad, you go get him and I'll join you in a minute as soon as I pack up the last of our things here. If it's a royal bird you shouldn't have any trouble convincing it to come back. Can probably just ride it back in fact, they're pretty tame." 

"You got it." Vanz stated then with a wide grin, glad at the chance to do something, anything other than stand here in the cold looking through a spyglass. He moved to the edge of the cliff face he and Shesal were perched upon, which was little more than a giant rocky outcropping that jutted up into the sky like a jagged tooth with a flat top. Some fifty feet in the air, it would have taken a climber quite some time to get to the top without the proper equipment. For a Dragoon it was a simple matter really. "I'll see you there Shesal..." He didn't even wait for his mentor to answer, before he crouched down, bunching his legs beneath him...

...and with a powerful leap, propelled propel himself skywards. Years upon years of specialized training had prepared him for this task. A combination of physical strength, and some said divine favor granted all Dragoons the unique ability to be able to perform astounding leaps and bounds that all but defied gravity in it's entirety, and allow them to land again, unharmed...as long as they landed upright. It was a rare time when a Dragoon didn't land with both feet squarely on the ground, as they took to the aerial leaps and bounds as readily as a bird took to the air or a fish to water. Vanz loved the feel of leaping from peak to peak, covering distances in a single bound lasting only a few seconds that would make the fastest Chocobo racer green with envy. He enjoyed the feeling of spreading his arms to either side, the sleek design of his armor offering minimal wind resistance, as he turned his face to look straight ahead, his beaked helmet cutting through the air easily as he soared freely. He loved every moment that he spent airborne, and at times, he felt like a bird, defying the pull of the world and being truly free. Flying was something that Dragoons could not do however, and eventually gravity claimed him again, Vanz was dropping once more, though his descent was controlled, and by now he had twisted his body in a half flip, to place his feet before him as he came down, aimed perfectly upon another rocky peak beneath him that jutted up from the ground. No sooner had he touched down, than he coiled his legs, like a pair of great springs, and pushed off again, performing a second great leap that carried him airborne. Thus was he and all of his profession able to perform these feats with great ease, covering such great distances in a mere heartbeat of the time it would take a person riding the same distance. For all of it's advantages however, the leaps and bounds were tiring, and no Dragoon could keep this up for too long, so when traveling great distances, it was best for them to do so on the back of a Chocobo or a horse like everyone else, to conserve their energy. In this instance however, the distance to the wayward bird was negligible. All but three or four leaps and he would be there.

He tried not to land -too- close to the animal. No sense startling it with his sudden arrival and driving the big bird off in a panic afterall. He didn't feel like trying to leap onto the back of a moving Chocobo, especially not tonight, so he aimed his descent to several dozen feet on the far side of the large bird, landing with little more than a solid thump of his armored body setting down, his form dropping into a crouch to help get rid of the last of his great momentum in a gesture that was second nature to all Dragoons, and was only possible due to incredible conditioning of his legs and ankles to strengthen them to near superhuman proportions. He turned about after straightening up, noting the Chocobo standing nearby, which had raised it's head and given out a questioning "Wark?" at the sound and shape. Seeing that it was humanoid however, the horse-sized bird didn't seem nervous, and in fact started to advance towards him, until the point that Vanz could reach out to rest one hand on the creature's beak, a common gesture with tame Chocobos that they evidently found soothing. This one was no different because the instant his palm was caressing the beak, the animal was chirring contentedly. Royal Chocobos, above all else had been specially bred to have pleasant demeanors, part of the reason they were so sought after. This particular one had a deep, sandy coloration...which looked more red and purple thanks to Luna and Ruby hanging overhead, but Vanz, like any other person had long since figured out how to mentally convert the perceived colors of the world that would result from the two moons into their daytime equivalent.

"Hey there big fellah." Vanz spoke in as soothing a voice as he could manage. He'd never been much for interacting with animals, but it seemed easy with this one. The -last- time he'd interacted with one of these creatures had been when he'd been trying to ride one on a dare. Unfortunately the creature's demeanor at the time was less than friendly and he'd been nearly trampled in the process. "Now why did you go and wander off from your flock? You got any idea how much you're worth to some bandit or thief that'd happen across you?" 

The Chocobo merely chirred back at him, turning so the knight could run his fingers through its feathers. Vanz allowed himself a few moments of this, chuckling to himself as the creature seemed to soak all the attention up. "You're a spoiled one aren't you? Just like the rest of your flock I bet. We better see about getting you back where you belong though huh?" He walked up to one side of the large bird, and reached out with one arm to place across it's back. Any time he'd ridden a Chocobo in the past, it had been in a saddle, but plenty of people rode them bareback as well, so how hard could it be? According to those he'd spoken to you just tucked your legs under the bird's wings and held onto its thick neck feathers and everything was fine. Needless to say he was startled when the bird suddenly gave out a loud squawk and darted off to one side. "Damn it not again.." His first assumption was of course that he'd committed some taboo and gone and offended the previously friendly bird in some fashion. He knew he should have paid more attention to what the  bird trainers had been saying back when he was a Squire. 

However, on second glance, he realized then that the Chocobo wasn't looking at him at all, but was instead staring off into the darkness, with it's wings spread wide, and it's feathers standing straight as it emitted a thick hiss and scraped it's clawed feet at the ground in a threat display. "...hey what?" he began, already starting to turn, before he suddenly felt a sharp impact, a blow strong enough to take the wind out of him and send him stumbling face-first into the ground. 

"Watch out lad!" Shesal's shout was immediate, commanding, but also warning in itself, and by the tone, Vanz knew that there was trouble afoot. Instinct and training made him kick off to one side, using his right leg to propel himself into a tumbling sideways leap, that he turned into a half roll and a cartwheel using his hands, finally to land in a crouch once more, his posture down on one knee. In a blur of motion behind him, Vanz was aware of a large, scaly shape leaping to the ground where he was a split second ago, lashing claws out to impact the ground in frustration as it missed it's mark a second time. It took the young Dragoon only a split second to piece together what had happened. It had leapt at him, while he had his back turned, and only Shesal's split second arrival had saved him, as the older Knight had pushed him forcefully to the ground to avoid the creature's initial leap, followed by Vanz' last second dodge allowing him to scarcely avoid getting clawed again. There was no time to reflect on the two close calls in a row, because the creature was a blur of motion once more, already leaping at him. It was a Rock Hopper, he knew this much, could see the crocodilian maw filled with teeth, the claws lashing out...and the speed. Such speed and agility!

"Move it Vanz! Don't sit still or he'll get you!" Shesal's words propelled him to action, and with another leap,  the young knight tried to clear the Rock Hopper's head, only being half successful in the process. The monster lashed out with one of it's hands, and its claws raked across his left leg, his armor thankfully protecting him from the knife-like blades, but the impact was enough to knock him off balance, and he tumbled down to the ground heavily, landing hard on his shoulder. His training kicked in again however, and he didn't sit idle, already rolling to one side and pushing off, flipping rolling and doing everything to become a moving object again. He kicked off from the ground with one leg, an awkward jump, though he twisted to align himself correctly in the air once more. A Dragoon's prerogative in battle was to never stop moving, never stop leaping, always have your opponent guessing where next you would be, and once again the Rock Hopper was confounded as the leap that it thought would be a triumphant rending of the downed knight had turned into grabbing of empty air once again. The creature was crafty however, and had guessed that he would repeat the motion once more, as it leapt after him, propelling itself far faster than Vanz' own clumsy leap, and for a moment, the young knight stared in horror as the creature came at him, mouth agape, teeth flashing as it prepared to make the kill, all while he was still airborne and unable to change his course. 

He waited for the impact, the crunching of teeth into his body, but it never came. Instead there was a loud crunch, and the Hopper's body flew wildly off to one side, as Shesal had impacted it, the older Dragoon having drawn his shield and spear, and now propelling him fully into the battle to intercept his opponent before it disemboweled his young protégé. "There's two more of them coming lad!" Shesal shouted, even as he and the Hopper fell opposite of each other, the creature snarling and snapping as it prepared itself to leap again as soon as it landed, the white armored Dragoon preparing himself to meet it head on. "Smaller ones but they're coming fast! Don't stop moving!" There was concern in the older man's voice, indeed, concern for Vanz' well being, but he could only divide his attention so many ways. 

For some reason, this filled Vanz with a sudden surge of adrenaline beyond what was already pumping in his veins. This was -his- fault! He had been careless. He should be dead right now were it not for his mentor's timely arrival, and Shesal was probably worried he would be killed by two of the creatures now. Vanz couldn't let that happen, his friend had his hands full as it was. "Be careful!" He called out then, as he reached back, slipping his sleek, carved shield from where it always was interlocked to his back, to blend in with the pattern of his armor so as not to restrict his movement. The shield moved over his left forearm, not providing the same amount of coverage as a footman's shield of course, but it was better than nothing. His right hand gripped onto a metal tube locked onto his other side, snapping it free from the clasps, and a quick twist of his wrist had the fold-up spear extending to it's full length, special mechanisms locking it into place as it became its full six foot length with a single motion. He turned to face his new opponents, instantly spotting the bounding forms coming in towards him. In fact, one of them was already descending on it's attack lunge, claws extended as it gleefully threw itself into the battle. Shifting to his right, Vanz planted his feet firmly onto the ground, raising his shield and holding it above him, even as he braced his spear with the tip pointing upwards, gleaming just slightly in the light of Luna and Ruby, which watched the battle overhead as impassively as always. 

The Rock Hopper didn't even adjust its course, too caught up in the frenzy of battle to realize it was setting itself up, and at the end of its leap, the creature impaled itself on Vanz' spear tip, the weapon sliding home as it wrenched into the predator's stomach. It snarled and screeched wildly in pain and rage, lashing out in a frenzy as it came to rest against the young knight's shield, arms and feet having enough reach to that they continuously raked across his armored form. And yet, Vanz held firm, driving his speartip home as he tried to inflict a lethal wound that would put the creature to death at last. He never even saw when the clawed limb descended just right, didn't even realize that it was about to hit him, until it already had. He only knew that he felt a sharp blow against his exposed face, and his head recoiled to one side as everything went black.

[i]Am I blind?[/i] The thought panicked him, with the thought of at least one other Rock Hopper still there, and even amidst the stars and blackness, he pushed off as quickly as he could, leaping straight backwards, without even looking where he was going. The jump was a strong one, carrying him several dozen feet into the air, and it was only at the apex of his leap that he rubbed at his face, feeling the warmth and fluid of what unmistakably must be blood...but whether his or the Hopper's he wasn't sure. He was relieved however to see that his sight was returning, amidst a few stars that he forcefully blinked away, in time to look down and see the other Hopper rising up to meet him, arms thrown out wide and claws ready to find his flesh somewhere beneath all of that armor. Vanz didn't think much about it, he just angled himself correctly, flipping about so his feet pointed skywards, and he descended straight down, in a practiced move common to all Dragoons as he extended his shield arm in front of him. This motion was often used against ground-based opponents on foot to stun them, but it worked just as well against airborne ones if you were certain you could hit your target, and indeed Vanz -was- certain, confirming this a moment later with another harsh crunch of impact, his body jarring with the force of colliding with the second Rock Hopper, feeling the harsh stench of it's breath upon his face as he all but stopped the creature's upward momentum and plunged downwards with it. 

He didn't know where Shesal was right now, even a few leaps having carried him a significant distance from where he'd started the battle. He hoped the old veteran was allright. [i]Heck, he's probably already done and is looking for me right about now.[/i] He found the chance to muse this to himself, right about the time he and the Rock Hopper landed. Vanz's intention had been to land on top of the Hopper and further stun it, then use his spear to finish the job, but he hadn't counted on crashing onto a diagonally slanted slope, and suddenly found himself pitched off wildly to one side, even as he and the predatory reptile were thrown wildly, tumbling and rolling down the side of a rocky crag, only to land harshly in a clatter in the bottom of a stone valley. His spear went flying from his right hand, clattering a few feet away. [i]DAMN![/i] He didn't have time to worry about it however, as the Rock Hopper was already moving again, snarling and lunging at him once more. He spun wildly to one side, feeling the lash of those claws across his armored back again, and the harsh snap of it's vice-like jaws coming shut just inches from where his head had been a moment ago. He continued through with the spin, building up momentum as he spun his left arm around, then savagely smashed it into the Hopper's head, staggering the beast and sending it careening off to one side from the blow. He used this opportunity to make a wild grab for his spear, but the Hopper recovered far more quickly than he had anticipated, and no sooner did he have the weapon in his grip than he felt one of those clawed hands seize around his ankle, followed by a harsh tug that jerked him off of his feet, and sent him flying into one of the many cliff walls of this area. Again, the wind rushed from his lungs, and his breath was already coming in harsh pants, struggling for oxygen. In most battles, Dragoons had the luxury of catching their breath between leaps, but not so with the Rock Hoppers, who could match them move for move with each passing second. Vanz was quickly running out of steam, and his mouth was filling with blood, filling his senses with the coppery taste. He knew by the pain that it had to be somewhere on his face...he was just thankful that he hadn't lost an eye in the process. 

[i]Got to finish this, now. Or he's gonna outlast me... [/i] 

He stumbled from the cliff face several paces, even as the Rock Hopper crouched, then lunged for him, going high as it sought to take his head into it's mouth once more. In a way, Vanz simply let gravity take its course, pitching forward as he spun about, to land harshly on his back, even as his attacker soared overhead, and at that precise moment, he stabbed upwards, violently...with his spear, which after recovering it, he had made absolutely sure not to loose his grip on. He felt the tip bite deeply into flesh, and the Hopper's course was altered violently as it lashed off to one side, flipping and tumbling along the ground, before it landed on it's back, where it proceeded to grip and tug at where the spear was lodged fatally into it's throat. It was to no avail however, and the struggles soon turned into death throes as the lethality of the wound could not be denied, and when its body finally laid still, Vanz was left, sitting upright, with his back to a large boulder, one hand clamped over his face where he felt the sharp pain stinging at his features, his breaths coming in thick, labored gasps. [i]I did it...[/i] The thought hit him suddenly, and he felt some satisfaction, and at the same time, worry, about Shesal's situation. [i]I hope he's allright. I gotta...get over there...[/i] He tried to will himself to his feet again, tried to get another wind into him, but he found his limbs unresponsive, and found himself only wanting to lie down, and catch his breath...to lay his head down. [i]...got to...help Shesal....can't....leave...him... [/i] 

Vanz didn't even feel it when his head hit the ground, protected by his helmet, and long since having blacked out by that point into blissful silence, the pain in his face all but a distant memory in the wake of the pleasant warmth of unconsciousness.

It starts a little slow, but there’s nothing wrong with that, and you more than made up for it.

Welcome to the forum, by the way.

Yeah it got a little wordy at the beginning, though that was kind of on purpose cause at first I was writing this for a friend who didn’t play much Final Fantasy or the like. Plus since this wasn’t an already established game setting I wanted to sort of get a feel for things that might be taken for granted in the setting, like the two moons at night. Dunno how well I pulled that off.

I welcome any and all comments really. :slight_smile:

You might want to make more paragraphs so they’re not in huge blocks.

I agree. More paragraphs.

Pretty good story so far. I love your description of the Jumps. :slight_smile:

Well after quite awhile where I got busy doing other things, I finally came back, looked at my fic and decided I’d write some more with it and see where it took me. So, here’s what I wrote up so far…still gonna keep adding to it. I figure I may as well post it here, I don’t have any other outlets through which to express it right now. If you got any comments, fire away. :slight_smile: Note that this is an unedited, first draft kind of add-on that I haven’t gone through to clean up irritating grammar bits or spelling errors that might have slipped through. So there might be some things here and there.


Morning was a far cry from the deep, well lit nights that dominated half of the world’s day to night cycle. Rather than the ember glow cast by Luna and Ruby overhead, casting a reddish haze to the world around and a dark overcast to the sky, when the sun was high, the sky was bright blue, and the landscape about dotted with the colors expect with daily life. 

In this case, the landscape being some thirty miles West of Ceinan’s borders, the landscape was green and lush with grass, with the occasional collection of trees and bushes, though for actual forests one would have to venture further to the west, towards the more populated borders of the Meleran kingdoms, or even far to the north to more wild lands where it was said the forests were so deep that a party could wander into them for a year at a time and not be seen by another soul. 

Here however, in a small village set outside Ceinan’s border, most of the landscape was hilly and devoid of much heavy foliage. Which made it suitable for farming, both crops and livestock. The land was fed by a thick river that flowed in from the mountains further to the south, and the bridge that spanned this river was seen as a point of strategic interest to the kingdom situated to the east, hence why they had long since established a border guard and a small outpost here to keep an eye on things. As a result of this proximity to Ceinan, and being essentially a gateway to the open steppes, and even the Wastelands to the further east, the village of Lyndan had become something of a stopover for many travellers and merchants passing through. In this way, it was a profitable business to own a tavern or an Inn in this location and cater to those travellers through food, drink and a place to rest one’s weary head for the night. The Silver Mug was no exception to this rule, and was in fact, viewed as one of Lyndan’s more respectable establishments, not so much due to facilities that catered to the upper class, as there certainly were places more fitted for their tastes, but rather the Silver Mug was seen as a wholesome, safe place set close to the guard posts, that offered good home cooked meals along with clean pillows and sheets for those that desired them. There were rarely any issues for the owner of the establishment to hear from those that took of their hospitality.

There were no complaints from Kaylee Glowand, whom had spent a restful night in one of the second floor rooms. She hadn't expected to get an entire room to herself, but the Innkeeper's wife had been insistant on ensuring that the young woman got some privacy for her money, despite Kaylee's protests that she be treated just like anybody else. One would have guessed that it wasn't so much that she was a female, but the fact that she wore the priestly garments of a white mage that might have had something to do with it. Finding the Innkeeper's wife to be an adversary that she could not argue with, the young spellcaster had finally relented and given in to the comparitive luxury of an entire bed to herself, as well as a wash basin that she was already making use of after having woken up shortly after the sunrise. 

Cold water was splashed onto her youthful, smooth face. Her skin had a faintly tanned tone to it, as if she'd been out in the sun for most of her life, but it was really the natural color of her skin, something that had made many of the other girls back home jealous. Large, bright blue eyes were closed at the moment, as she continued to splash liberal handfuls of cold water onto her cheeks and forehead, mindful of her long, wavy tresses of blonde hair that spilled down about her shoulders freely for now, not confined within the hood of her priestly robe as it usually was. 

Thoroughly refreshed, Kaylee found that the only thing that could possibly go well alongside this would be a good, cool breath of morning air, and the room had a door that led to a small balcony that would allow just that. She was a bit self conscious, given that she was dressed only in her lacking vestments that she usually wore under her robes, but a quick, cautious glance outside showed that there was no one milling about on the road below, and no one outside just yet. Everyone was probably still having their breakfast, thus she stepped out to the railing and for a moment, luxuriated in the feel of the cool morning air, still faintly damp with the mist settled onto her bare skin, her forehead, and even into her hair. A long, deep breath filled her lungs, and was expelled with a soft, contented sigh. At times like this, one could feel like they were on top of the world...

"Hey, I can see your underwear." 

...if there was nothing else that could bring her crashing down from her all too brief moment of luxury, it would be those spoken words, from above, and behind her. Kaylee's initial reaction wasn't even to turn and see the source, but was instead to give a loud shriek, and immediately burst back through the door into the room from hence she came. She nearly tripped in her rush to get to the opposite side of the bed, to the dresser where she had laid out her robes. In a matter of seconds, she had already pulled them on, over her head and begun to shrug them into place on her petite frame, the billowing material being a stark white in color, save for the red borders along the hem, sleeves and hood that signalled the Order of white mages to which she belonged. Only when she had the robes on did she turn and glare towards the door, which in her haste she had left open when she rushed back inside. She knew who that voice belonged to.

She didn't have to wait long before a head swung down from above...upside-down for the moment. Youthful, boyish features of a male who had only a short time ago made the life's graduation to young man was framed by a wild, untamed array of hair, the exact same blonde color as Kaylee's. The youth's hair was tied into place by a green headband fixed around his forehead, though currently being upside down, it sprouted downwards in all directions like some puffed up threat display from an animal. Eyes just as blue as the girl's stared back at her, and it was all Kaylee could do to look with unhidden rage into the smug features of her twin brother Maxx.

"You scared me!" She flung out accusingly, even giving a snap of her arm in his direction for good measure. "I thought somebody had seen me out there!" 

"Somebody DID see you. Me." Maxx responded in an upside down smirk, his arms coming into view, hands that were encased in dark leather gloves with their finger tips cut away gripped at the door frame, as he agilely lowered himself, flipping over with the strength in his arms until he landed upright on the balcony. Compared to his sister, Maxx's state of dress was far less formal. A green tunic, the same color as his headband, adorned his upper features, crisscrossed by a pair of belts that held a seemingly endless supply of tools, gadgets, sharp objects and even a couple of potion bottles. On his lower half, he wore a pair of loose, yet comfortable leather breeches, that were tucked into dark soled knee-high boots that were worn well with use, but still in good condition. A pair of immaculate daggers were tied firmly to his upper arms, kept in place by their sheathes, but within easy position to be drawn in an emergency. He had every bit the look of a person of less than ill repute, and anyone that glanced at him would immediately label him a Thief, though Maxx would have been quick to state that he was an Adventurer instead.

Kaylee wasn't quite so ready to let the slight go, as she picked up one of the pillows and threw it at her sibling, hitting him square in the face. 

"Ow, hey!"

"You -know- what I meant! You know nobody's supposed to see me out of my robes in any other state of dress!" Or undress, she almost added. "It's forbidden! I could have been in alot of trouble!" 

"Oh boo hoo." Maxx retorted, giving the pillow a toss back onto the bed as he crossed his arms in a gesture that his sister had long since become annoyed with. It was the posture he adopted when he was getting ready to be the 'big brother', nevermind the fact that he was really only about fifteen minutes older than her. "Listen to little Miss 'I got my own room last night'. You know I spent the whole night sleeping next to this big bald guy in the other bed? He smelled funny and talked in his sleep. I was afraid he was going to start breaking things at random just cause he was having a bad dream." 

"Maybe if we were lucky, the only thing he would have broken would have been you." Kaylee shot back, letting her irritation override her desire to defend that she -did- try to talk the Innkeeper's wife out of it. She turned her back on him and began to gather up the few things she had unpacked the previous night. The two were accustomed to travelling, and so each of them only really had a single carry-on bag that held their assorted items and trail rations. The only other object that she carried with her was the wooden staff that was propped up in the corner.

"Ouch. Right to my heart sis. Right to my heart." Maxx responded, though his features nevertheless twisted up into a grin, even as he uncrossed his arms and walked across the room. "C'mon, you know I was keeping an eye out for you. Always have right?" 

Kaylee sighed for a moment, but still couldn't bring herself to say anything. She merely continued packing her things. 

"Sooo..." Maxx continued after a brief awkward silence, deciding it was time to change the subject. He leaned against the door frame, setting one hand on his hip. "Once you've got everything, we should get going if we're going to meet our contacts for this job on time." 

All thoughts of irritation with her brother vanished then at another thought. "No breakfast?" Kaylee was nearly beside herself. She'd been looking forward to something as good as the dinner she'd enjoyed last night. The first time in a while she'd enjoyed a good home cooked meal. 

"Don't be spoiled!" Maxx chided her. "We told those two we'd meet them shortly after sunrise over at the bridge, and I don't intend to be late! They're paying us pretty well to see that we get them to Ceinan safely!" 

"But, no breakfast?" Kaylee insisted as she picked up her staff, turning a pleading look towards her twin.

The look was enough to cause Maxx to sigh, and roll his eyes faintly. "Look, once we -get- to Ceinan, we'll have enough money we can get a really good meal into us before we go looking for more work. You ever heard of their Chocobos? They say the chefs in the castle can serve up some of the best steaks you ever sunk your teeth into, and the eggs they cook up for breakfast are to die for."

Kaylee could feel an all too familiar rumbling in her belly at the thought of it, as the disappointment of missing a hot breakfast was replaced by the anticipation of a kingly meal at Ceinan. "Hmm...promise?" She asked eagerly then, to which Maxx immediately raised his right hand. 

"I promise, when we get to Ceinan, you'll eat like a queen."

"I better, or the queen'll take her scepter to her royal brother's head!" She grinned, tapping him in the chest with the head of her staff before she opened the door and made her way out into the hallway.

For all her fears about missing breakfast, Kaylee wasn't completely disappointed. The Innkeeper's wife had insisted on giving the young white mage a handful of freshly baked sweetbuns as she departed. It put her in such a good mood that Kaylee even shared them with Maxx as they departed from the Silver Mug. They had agreed with their contacts to meet with them at the East bridge that led the way deeper into Ceinan's territory, but they had decided they should probably rent a couple of horses. Their employers had a wagon and it wouldn't exactly be comfortable on the feet to have to keep up with them on foot. The problem was that purchasing two suitable, and cheaper animals had used up nearly all of their money.


"Well, things are gonna be mighty tight until we get this job done..." Maxx noted with something that distinctly sounded like sorrow in his voice, even as he looked into the near-empty changepurse that they kept their funds in. 

"We'll be allright. You said this job was paying well right?" Kaylee's mood was decidedly higher now that she'd eaten, and she was currently petting the two horses that had been selected, the animals being colored a deep chestnut, and obviously a mixture of breeds. Not what one would call the most valuable of horses, but they would certainly be suitable for the trip. 

"Yeah...." Maxx conceded after a moment, closing the changepurse and tying it back to his side, held in place by a series of loops that also kept the top closed. It meant that he had to spent more time untying the strings to get the top open, but it was a deterrant to pickpockets...something that he knew well. 

Kaylee was already pulling her small frame up into the saddle on the back of one of the animals, letting the beast get adjusted to her weight and waiting for Maxx to also mount up before setting a slow trot towards the bridge. "So what do you know about these guys anyway? You were the one that talked to them." She finally asked, feeling in a conversational mood all of a sudden. 

"Who, the ones we're meeting?" When Maxx received a nod in response, he rolled his shoulders in a shrug. "I dunno, it was brief. They didn't give me their names...I get the feeling they didn't -want- to give me their names. Maybe they're in some kinda trouble somewhere..." The frown that came from Kaylee prompted him to add, "I don't mean -lawful- type trouble, I mean as in hiding from somebody. It's just a guess anyway. The woman was the one I talked to the most." 

"Woman?" Kaylee blinked in curiosity.

"Yeah. A man and a woman. They look an awful lot alike, they could be brother and sister too for all I know. Both got long hair, really black. Kinda pale faces, I think they're from somewhere far south, though I've got no clue from where. There's something else though..." Maxx trailed off for a moment, as if unsure. "...I dunno. Something creepy I guess. They got these funny green eyes. Maybe it's normal where they come from, I just couldn't help noticing it." 

Kaylee glared across the distance between their two horses. "Just cause their eyes are green you find them creepy? Maxx!"  

Her brother raised one hand in a defensive posture. "I know, I know. I'm just saying...allright? Just keep an eye out on this trip. Probably nothing's gonna happen, or if we -do- have trouble it'll probably be from the damn wildlife. I hear this place can have some pretty mean Rock Hopper infestations. But just keep an eye out for...I dunno....anything." 

Kaylee couldn't help grinning just slightly at that. "Right, if I see an anything pop up I'll be sure to let you know." 

Maxx sighed, shaking his head as he set his gaze to forward once again.

I remember this! Nice to see it again.
That first paragraph looks a bit run-on, and there are a couple little issues here and there, but since this is only a draft, I’m not going to go into detail unless you ask.
A comment on Kaylee’s appearance: you said she has a skin tone that is naturally tan and that the other girls were envious. If the setting is a medieval one, this would unlikely be the case, since most commoners worked outdoors and would all have some degree of tan, while the nobility would take pride in the whiteness of their skin: the more white, the more beautiful. This would be a reflection of their wealth that they not need to venture outside to work like the peasants did.

Yeah. Generally when I write something out I go through it again a day or two later and start cleaning up grammar errors and the likes, which this one will likely get the treatment. Don’t think there’s anything else TOO bad with it though.

Hmm, as for the tan thing, well I suppose it would apply typically to a medieval setting, although I’m kind of taking it to left field so to speak since Final Fantasy settings are often anything but typical fantasy. :slight_smile: I suppose though I should reword it, as my intention wasn’t so much that she -has- a tan as opposed to others not having them, but she has a -perfect- tan to her skin. In modern society it’d be like the kind of person that never seems to get a sunburn and always has that ‘just rightly toasted’ look to them. Kaylee isn’t supposed to be of Noble stock, so I didn’t want to give her a fair skin or the like. More going for that ‘lucky farmgirl’ look so to speak. If that makes any sense.

–Suprisingly this thing hasn’t died it seems. Though I did get rather occupied with a hundred and one other things for the last little while. Fingers started typing again tonight however and I added a bit. Will add some more maybe tomorrow when I’m not as out of it as I am right now.


It had been roughly twelve hours since Vanz had regained consciousness. Rather than finding himself still laying on the cold, hard ground of the steppes as he might have expected, he had been nestled safely in a bed within the infirmary in Ceinan Castle, his entire body aching and his face gripped by a stabbing pain that wouldn't go away. Since then, with the efforts of the infirmary's only two white mages, he had made remarkable progress. 

Even now, standing out of his bed, and half clad in his armor that he had begun to assemble on his body once more, the sharp agony to his face had been reduced to little more than a dull, background ache, something that he found he could easily ignore in comparison to the earlier pain.

Vanz stared at the image that reflected back at him from the mirror, without his helmet on, his handsome, youthful features were readily apparent, and he allowed himself a bit of vain satisfaction that in the attack from the Rock Hoppers, none of his hair had been torn out, the brown length currently pulled back into a ponytail that drooped to about the middle of his shoulders. 

He hadn't come away unmarked by the battle however, as fingers delicately poked and prodded at three perfect black lines that had been carved into his features, marring his young face forever. The claws had initially caught him on the right side of his face, just near the top of his cheek and just in front of his ear, then carved a path inwards, and down, towards his mouth, where it had stopped. It was only due to the fact that his head had been snapped to the side during the impact that the entire side of his face had not been torn off. With a shudder, Vanz noted how dangerously close he had come to losing his eye as well, something that the white mages would not have been able to fix. Sealing horrible wounds was one matter, regrowing lost body parts was beyond the abilities of all but those of legendary ability.

"It'll be a good scar lad." Shesal's familiar tone came from behind him, prompting Vanz to immediately stop poking at the healed wound and turn about with a bit of a sheepish grin. Were it one of the healers, they likely would have chided him for not giving the healed injury a chance to settle before he was touching it. 

The older dragoon stood in the doorway to the infirmary's main hall, arms crossed over his chest, one shoulder leaning against the arch. With some jealousy, Vanz had noted the veteran soldier had come away without so much as a scratch from the fight. At least none he could immediately see. Vanz had been told that Shesal had returned to the castle carrying the unconscious young dragoon in his arms, literally bursting into the infirmary to seek medical care for him. Once again, the older knight had come to his rescue, something that caused a bit more guilt to gnaw at Vanz' gut.

Shesal merely grinned  as he spoke. "It's the sort that carries a story with it, though for your sake I hope you try to keep your collection of them to a minimum as you get older hrm? It's bad enough you're already off to an early start." 

"Sorry..." Vanz didn't know if he was apologizing for the wound or the fact he felt like he'd been little more than a liability. His mentor must have sensed this uncertainty however, because he waved a hand dismissively a moment later. 

"Nothing to be sorry about, Lad. Those beasts have ambushed and killed people twice your age with ease. The fact that you took on two of them and still lived to tell the tale is a feat in itself that's got people all over the castle talking."

"Glad to know I've got a reputation starting..." Vanz responded without really meaning it. The last thing he wanted to really do was get anymore attention, he'd already had enough by graduating to Dragoon at so young an age in the first place. He started to finish the fastenings on the torso portion of his armor, working to secure them in place, even as he decided to change the subject. "The healers said I was free to go, could even go up on the Wall for the night if I wanted, though they'd prefer I take the night off..."

Another dismissive wave followed from Shesal then, as he straightened from where he had been leaning against the doorway. "It would be better if you did take the night off, yes. But in my years, I've spent my own fair share of time recovering from injuries and the first thing I wanted to do was to get outside and get back on duty, for fear of going crazy otherwise. Just promise that you'll take it easy for the next day or so. A little guard duty shouldn't wear you out too much."

"I promise. No crazy stuff." Vanz stated quickly, with something akin to a sigh of relief, as he finished with his torso and started to pull on the last pieces of his armor, his helmet sitting on the table next to his bed being the final part that he would take with him.

After Shesal had excused himself, Vanz wasted no time in getting out of the infirmary, though not before the healers had their way with him one last time, making sure that the magic from their fingers had properly knitted the wounds on his face and there was no risk of infection. One of them even chided him for having had his fingers on it. How she had known, Vanz had no idea, and didn't venture to ask, he was just glad to be outside again, in the waning hours of  the next day. It had been almost twenty four hours since the attack out by the feeding grounds, and yet to him it only felt as if it had been an hour or so ago. The infirmary was set within the courtyard of the castle, being somewhat underground that one had to traverse a set of stairs into the ground to enter or leave the facility. Out in the open courtyard, he could see the battlements of Ceinan Castle around him, and those few Guardsmen that were already at their posts, the unlucky ones who had pulled the night shift.

Pulling his helmet onto his head, and tucking his hair back into place in the special groove reserved for it, Vanz noted with some dismay that in the wake of the sun setting, the coming night was likely to be as chilly as the one before. The difference was that this time he had his gloves, and he was quick to get them on his hands before they had a chance to get cold. Finally satisfied that all was well, Vanz leapt upwards then, testing his limbs and finding them working just fine, though he noted not to push himself too harshly. The arc of his powerful leap carried him over the courtyard, towards the castle's main entrance itself, where he alighted amidst the top battlements and nearly scared one of the regular guardsmen such that the man almost toppled from his post in suprise. 

Vanz mumbled an apology, overhearing the guardsmen's muffled curse about the ''damned dragoons need to wear bells around their necks', the man shuffling off to a different part of the castle's roof to apparently be alone. It only then occurred to Vanz that he might have happened upon the guard snoozing at his post, and for a moment, he found himself tempted to say something, though he stopped himself as quickly as the thought surfaced. Despite the fact that the guardsman was of the 'regular' stock of soldiers, and Vanz' position was higher by his very status, he had no real authority over the other, as the Royal Dragoons were a unit unto themselves. The man was also much older than Shesal and might not take well to some young hot shot upstart lecturing him on staying awake at his post. 

Thus did Vanz satisfy himself with walking to the front of the castle's roof to look out on the city beyond. The top of the castle itself was a series of battlements and fortifications, meant to serve as a last ditch, high point for defenders to fight from in the event that an invasion went against the city of Ceinan. Thankfully it had never been used in such a fashion, and probably never would be. Right now it served as an excellent vantage point for Vanz to look out over the castle courtyard, the walls, and the city beyond, seeing the torchlights of the city casting their orange glows into the growing darkness as night took hold. Luna was already rising in the sky, though Ruby would only be partially visible tonight, so more light would be needed to see properly. 

Looking out on the city was calming to Vanz, and he found himself thinking back towards the encounter with the Rock Hoppers. Once again, guilt surfaced at the thought of being a liability to Shesal rather than a help, though the older knight's words did stick with him. He had managed to fight and kill two of the beasts and survive, albeit with a scar to tell the tale. Not bad for his first time. Vanz allowed himself a bit of a smile as he raised his right hand, flexing and unflexing slowly to watch his fingers, still able to envision them gripped around his spear as he'd run the first beast through. It wasn't exactly how he'd envisioned his first fight would be, but it had come out in his favor, and he'd heard alot of the older soldiers talk about how the first battle was always the hardest, and would determine if you were fit for this kind of life or better off leaving it, assuming you survived. Vanz -had- survived it, and had found a new confidence in himself that hadn't been there before, where there might have been doubt or hesitation. He'd been blooded in battle, and now truly was a Royal Dragoon of Ceinan. He would never hesitate again, would never be uncertain about anything anymore. Another grin crossed his features now even as he closed his hand into a fist, feeling his spirits lift even higher. Royal Dragoon Vanz Lance. Veteran warrior in the defense of the crown.

He liked it more and more everytime he repeated it to himself.

When Vanz and Shesal had fought their life and death battle with the ambushing Rock Hoppers, Maxx, Kaylee and their 'charges' had been on the road into the beginning of their second day. The winding paths of the steppes slowed down any sort of progress, and one had to be careful particularly traveling at night for fear of the local wildlife. Now however, at the end of that second day, with daylight beginning to disappear over the horizon, the city of Ceinan and the end of this short journey was finally in sight.

Kaylee had only met the two people they were escorting initially upon meeting them at the bridge, and as soon as she had laid eyes on them, she was convinced that like herself and Maxx, they must be twin siblings. Not only for the simple fact that their appearance was similar in many fashions, both had pale, fair skin, almost white to the naked eye, and their hair dark, like a raven's feathers, let to drape down to the middle of their backs in flowing waves. They had sharp, almost elven features that prompted her to study their faces during the first meeting, and it was there that she finally understood what Maxx had been talking about when he'd seen their eyes. A shade of green that seemed to almost radiate their presence, they had the sort of gaze that suggested they could look right through someone and see into the very depths of their soul. Despite the fact that she had chided Maxx at first for making assumptions based on someone's appearance, Kaylee had had an involuntary shiver when she'd met their gazes for the first time. 

Even their names further convinced her that they were related. Seral, the woman was clad in the garb of a noble woman, with a long, flowing dress made of the finest silks and of her features often hidden behind a veil. Jewelry the sorts of which the young white mage had never seen before adorned her features, and the strange woman seemed to always make an effort to keep her hands folded within the flowing length of the sleeves of her gown, though Kaylee could not see anything wrong with them or reason that they should be hidden from view. They were quite delicate and pretty really.

The man, Lares was the one who made Kaylee particularly nervous however. He was clad in lavender armor that adorned his form, much like a knight would dress, though he wore no helmet. A thick, dark cloak was draped over his shoulders, trailing almost to the ground, and usually pulled around his form as if to hide his body from view. It was obvious he carried a longsword at his side however, though the hilt was generally kept out of one's immediate glance, only visible now and then with his movements. His features were boyish, and handsome, Kaylee had to admit this, but he was also distant, and not the friendly sort. This wasn't to say that he had been rude to Kaylee and Maxx, far from it. He had in fact, not so much as said a word since they had met, Seral being the one who had done all the speaking. But something Kaylee's mother had once warned her about the 'strong silent' type made her wary to such a point that she hadn't even noticed when Maxx had guided his horse up alongside hers, and reached out to poke her elbow, startling the girl in her saddle. 

"Don't do that!" she hissed at him, spinning to glare towards her brother.

"Geez sis, take it easy. You were looking out of it and I was worried you'd fallen asleep in the saddle."

"Not likely." Kaylee snorted a moment later, though at the thought of sleep she immediately broke out into a wide yawn, raising the back of her hand to cover her mouth. It prompted her to add, "..though it -has- been awhile since we stopped. My whole lower half has gone numb." 

Maxx chuckled, rolling his shoulders with a faint shrug. "We're almost there, you can see the city. Once we get in there we'll get a nice room at an Inn, get a good night's sleep...get a good breakfast and go from there." 

This brought a smile to the young white mage's features, and she nodded quickly. "Allright, sounds good!" 

Overall, they rode in silence after that, eyes fixed upon the city laid out before them as they drew closer, Luna rising in the sky above, Ruby mostly covered by the world's shadow, such that her usual, bright red glow was much more restrained this night.