“I like pie,” he states.
Pie is very good indeed.
Haiku about pie.
Overabundant Celebration,
decreasing hopes of progression,
There’s no you in ‘Finality’
Overabundant Celebration,
decreasing hopes of progression,
There’s no you in ‘Finality’
school is starting soon
and my birthday’s coming up
so i’m overjoyed
It’s funny to read
These haiku poems on here
I’m laughing out loud.
:mwahaha:
Now I bid farewell
For I must watch my shows
That I taped last night.
While watching T. V.
I’ll write my one-shot fanfic
And be done tonight
Why do I still write
I guess I should stop now
This is the end . . . bye!:moogle:
Whoops, I put six syllables in most of them instead of seven. How did that happen? BTW, I counted poem as 2 syllables. Is that even right? Po-ems. Poems. Poooooo-emmmmmms . . . . . can anyone clarify on that?
I search for Mega Man.
X5 remains hidden though.
I can’t buy it! Arrg!
my brother’s fic is
a wonderful one he states
which I agree with
the Fanfiction King
has yet to be decided
as my brother writes
cross country is
one of my most favorite sports
that I succeed in
BTW d Galloway IS my brother if you didn’t know already.
I did not know that
Galloway was your brother
because I am new
^.^ But now I know! :victoly:
I did not know that.
Because I never asked them.
I know it now though.
Shiny bishounen
Are my favorite playtoys.
glomphuggleglompcling
I ate a poptart
It was very delicious
Poptarts are my god
Writing teh haiku
Is upping my total posts.
Postcount +++.
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oh and while on vacation a haiku that didn’t make much sense (syntaxically at least) popped into my head full-formed kinda randomly once, lemme see if I can remember it (cause it was really cool, like what I described in it had just happened and all of a sudden I was reciting something to myself and then I was like WHOA A HAIKU)
as heaven’s last tear
falls from ashen clouds, I yearn
for rain’s fall anew
-Mazrim Taim
Spooge is on the walls.
FinalFang likes to drink spooge.
He is Spoogzilla.
In Reply to my haiku, FinalFang writes :
Shin is a cookie.
Cookies bring lav and peace, bitch.
Spooge cookies for Shin!
Strictly speaking, haikus are supposed to go 5-7-5 and are not supposed to be a sentence broken up; each line has its own indepedance, and may or may not be related at all. But each line should be an independant thought.
the way I’ve always thought of it, grammatical structures like “sentence” don’t really have a place in most poetry (haikus especially) - they’re more just, thoughts put to words. And for haikus specifically, each line should illustrate some separate aspect of the idea or feeling you’re trying to convey - that is, they shouldn’t be COMPLETELY isolated from one another, but you should try not to have one line with no feeling in it, or one line with two separate images, or whatever - that’s just the impression I’ve gotten from looking at like, REAL badass haikus like by what’s his face…that dude.
-Mazrim Taim
Sentence structures may not apply, but you should still try to give each line its own independance. Like, “blah blah blah blah is” or “and that is why that” are not okay 
well yeah
poetry is entirely evocative writing IMO - like, it’s COMPLETELY different from a story. So obviously just a 17-syllable thought doesn’t really count as “decent” poetry. “decent” poetry is a chance collection of words that, regardless of what each individual word is, together, SOMEHOW, they bring forth an image, idea, or emotion. It’s why writing poetry is such a high art, cause…yeah. That shit.
And cless, your sig rocks
-Mazrim Taim
If only I had my poetry packet from English class last year… In addition to each line being semi-independant, the final five syllabels often create sort of a twist in the theme of the poem.
There was an example of a haiku that would perfectly demonstrate this example, but I can’t remember it. Fudge.
Sadly i cannot write an haiku either. Its been like 6 years since i have done one. thinks back to the days as a 6th grader.