I know this probably sounds really pathetic and wet but i could really use some reviews. Hoe sad is it that I have to ASK people to give me reviews?
Anyhoo, my story is
A THousand Words by Serenity Star
It should be in the ffx section of the fanfic archive at rpgc. Thanks!
First off, Hello, and welcome to RPGC.
Second, it’s not sad. You need to realize how few reviews most fanfic writers get for their works without asking. It’s best to ask, anyway; It shows you’;re interested in what we have to say, and are interested in improving your skills.
Third, it’s generally a good idea to givew a direct link to any story you want reviewed. People here have attention spans that last a heartbeat, and would probably be distracted before they ever got to your story. As for me, I’ma gonna go there now.
Exactly! I told myself I would read your story after I finished checking the boards, but I would have completely forgotten if I hadn’t noticed Val posted a reply.
And about having to ask for reviews, take a look at the responses in my thread titled “First Fic”. In about 40 posts, I have made all but about 7. Here at RPGC, when no one says anything, that usually means that you don’t have any real mistakes.
Edit: Wow. There’s an ethereal voice softly narrating the flashbacks. Even as the tension builds to the climax, it’s calm and reassuring. And when the story ends, it’s like a punch to the chest, knocking you down; it’s that powerful.
Okey kokey thx for the advice guys. Here’s a link to my story for all u lazy asses out there (like me)
http://www.rpgclassics.com/fanfics/fics/athousandwords.shtml
and just in case you’re interested (which you probs won’t be), my fanfiction portfolio can be found at