Well, it looks good, but the nose needs to have more of a curve. I know it’s picky, but it makes the drawing look better.
Sorry it took me so long to update… Just now got around to scanning the second draft ^^;;
I traced the original, and made the following adjustments:
*Centered the nose and mouth
*Didn’t shade the hair, to make it easier for coloring, even though I didn’t color this copy
*Made some new strands of hair, to make her hairline appear lower
*Made her eyelashes look like eyelashes
*Attempted to make the whites of her eyes clearer, dunno if it really worked tho
And as you can see, she now has an off-center body. The clearly erased lines or from me taking hours to figure that out.
More comments, pweese ^^
Much better, looking good.
Thats awsome, nessa, want to draw a pic of me?
Perhaps, once I’m feeling more confident of my abilites ^^
:yipee:
Very nice, and you’re wrong you don’t suck at bodies.
Nice.
More folds in clothes plzkthx
Excellent head.
…Erm…uh…heh…
Maybe the neck should be shortened a bit…and the body should probably be rounded a bit more (though that’s still a better body than I’ve ever drawn. Bodies don’t come easily).
But the head, certainly, is beyond reproach.
The shoulders slope well, too.
Great job, Nessa! And she’s an original creation; those are harder to draw!
Yeah, it’s not as detailed as it should be… but that’s just because this isn’t a final drawing, and it doesn’t need details, and I just want to focus on drawing the shapes right.
Nessa, there’s only one way of describing it: It’s simply great!
hugs Nessa You’re a great artist!:yipee: