Lina -- Nessa attempts to learn to draw!

Well, it looks good, but the nose needs to have more of a curve. I know it’s picky, but it makes the drawing look better.

Sorry it took me so long to update… Just now got around to scanning the second draft ^^;;

I traced the original, and made the following adjustments:

*Centered the nose and mouth

*Didn’t shade the hair, to make it easier for coloring, even though I didn’t color this copy

*Made some new strands of hair, to make her hairline appear lower

*Made her eyelashes look like eyelashes

*Attempted to make the whites of her eyes clearer, dunno if it really worked tho

And as you can see, she now has an off-center body. The clearly erased lines or from me taking hours to figure that out.

More comments, pweese ^^

Much better, looking good.

Thats awsome, nessa, want to draw a pic of me?

Perhaps, once I’m feeling more confident of my abilites ^^

:yipee:

Very nice, and you’re wrong you don’t suck at bodies.

Now that is a real ho to be proud of!

hugs Nessa :slight_smile:

Nice.

More folds in clothes plzkthx

Excellent head.

…Erm…uh…heh…

Maybe the neck should be shortened a bit…and the body should probably be rounded a bit more (though that’s still a better body than I’ve ever drawn. Bodies don’t come easily).

But the head, certainly, is beyond reproach.

The shoulders slope well, too.

Great job, Nessa! And she’s an original creation; those are harder to draw!

Yeah, it’s not as detailed as it should be… but that’s just because this isn’t a final drawing, and it doesn’t need details, and I just want to focus on drawing the shapes right.

Nessa, there’s only one way of describing it: It’s simply great!
hugs Nessa You’re a great artist!:yipee: