I’ve come across the “How to Draw Manga” website, and have used their tutorials to help me learn how to draw, because I suck at drawing, and I want to be better.
So here is the head of “Lina,” a character I made up for the sole purpose of practicing. She has a neck too, but since it’s not attached to any shoulders yet, it’s kinda hard to tell.
Looks like a nice start to me Apart from what other people already said, maybe you could experiment with different pencils to see which one fits you and this style best. A technicality to end them all, but ah well…
/recalls the time he went there himself to check upon things, but then learned his stuff quicker elsewhere…
Your real problems start with the body, not the head, let me assure you. I started with heads somewhat nicely and noticed that my body anatomy went kinda haywire wince I had never ever practiced any proportions earlier…
Thank the higher powers for a good art teacher in high school
Ooh, I like her hair! If I knew who she was (I don’t know a thing about manga or anime), I’d recognize her. But she’s very cute! And I must say, you’re certainly a good artist for a first timer! Much, much better than me!
The shading/coloring of her hair is kinda raw. [Note: “raw” is neither “good” nor “bad” that’s just how I’d describe that look. I kinda like it, personally. I dunno if that was your goal or not.]
Is her head supposed to be tilted at an angle? If not, than other people’s comments about centering the nose and mouth might apply (and her left I should come up a little bit). If she IS supposed to be tilting her head (which is what I first assumed) than that’s all fine.
The neck, such as it is, is really good.
[Insert similar comments about the shape of her hair, too.]
In general, actually, I really like the eyes. Yeah, there’s no whites, but I’m figuring that’s a convention of the style (and even if it’s not, I like it anyway and recommend you make it your style).
I can see the lines where you drew her locks of hair “through” her eyebrows and eyes. That would be something to “clean up.”
Overall, pretty good (and way ahead of my level of drawing “talent”, to be sure).