Ideas I've had.... What do you think?

First:

Well I’ve had an idea for an Online Life-esque sprite comic. Now I wish I could draw…

I sitll like the idea, but it’s kind of evolved intoa Martix-style concept.

The scenario I have is this: In an alternate world, computers are more advanced than here: IE, the VOS (Virtual Operating System) has been created. With a special computer, a person can actually mentally enter the Internet, via a method not unlike dreaming. The VOS produces an assistant not unlike the Navi in Megaman Battle Network, but not intelligent (With a few exceptions, mentioned below) and the world isnt’ nearly as computer obessesed.

That said, while “jacked into” the internet, you actually feel what your avatar feels, just like in the MAtrix.

The main character is a coder for the internet: he designs apps to be used over the net. He also (although he has no idea why) has the only intelligent Navi on the net (well two or three… one for his wife, and the other for his kid if I plan to include one). He thinks he might have created it, but he doesn’t know how. A breakthrough yes, but the Navi flatly refuses to replicate (“My programming forbids it”).

One of the storylines had the main character rushing to create a patch for a virus infesting the net: It disables the “kill bit”, that prevents a person from dying because they’ve “died” on the net, and prevents them from jacking out to protect themself, thus allowing them to be killed on the net. A friend is stuck with the virus, and his wife and said friend are fighting off said attackers while he tries to finish the fix before anyone gets killed.

The second idea was for a game.

Ever heard of mass disappearances? Such as the lost colony of Roanoke?

Well, an entire town disappears. Except one person, being you. You don’t know why you remain, but you take it upon yourself to figure out what happened to everyone. As soon as you go somewhere though, you’re attacked by something remincent of Silent Hill. So now monsters are appearing all over the place, you’re trying to figure out what happened to everyone (and the fact that you can’t seem to LEAVE town), and you have friends coming to visit. (who will help you during the game)

One villain I thought of was aliens taking the people for experiments for the perfect biological weapon: the monsters are actually transformed townspeople.

Another idea given to me (thanks Archone!) is the idea of “Proteus”. This is from an article he showed me:

The Ominous God

Researcher Richard Lazarus suggests that meteorites are behind these mysteries. During their fall on the ground, celestial bodies are charged with a potential as high as billions (!) of volt. On hitting Earth’s surface they explode with a violent force, as it happened near the River Tunguska, Siberia. But sometimes meteorites fall apart before they reach Earth, hitting it with a huge wave of energy that creates electrostatic levitation. Under these circumstances, large groups of people, ships or even trains may be lifted up and transferred across vast distances.

Ancient Greeks of the city-states situated in Italy attributed the disappearance of people to the deeds of god Proteus. Consisting of protoplasm it dozes underground and once in 50 years wakes up to have a meal. Proteus could transform into any thing and was imagined as coming to the surface from volcanoes.

So, people had to sacrifice to it a hundred of virgin slave girls leaving them near a volcano. And they disappeared without a trace, leaving behind only their fetters. The well-known American writer Dean Koontz in his horror book Phantoms favors a theory of the incorporeal god and believes that Proteus existed in realoty.

“It is an enormous mass of protoplasm covering maybe an area of some square kilometers,” explains Koontz. "Some millions years of age, it is probably one of the very first forms of life existing in the entrails of Earth or deep in the ocean. Once or twice in a century it eats people dissolving and digesting them almost entirely. Deep pools of water were found in the huts of Roanoke colony. A Chinese pilot searching for a missed train spotted from air a small lake that seemed to emerge from nowhere. Frozen water was found in the huts of an abandoned small Eskimo village on the shores of Lake Anjikuni, Canada, in 1930. The human body is 90 percent water, and that was perhaps all that was left of the dissolved victims of Proteus.

Of course, you have to be able to save the town, so they probably won’t be so much devoured as changed into monsters, yet again. REmember, PRoteus was a shapeshifter according to the Greek Mythos. Silly concept quoted, perhaps, but hey it’s never stopped anyone… And if it owuld make a good game…

What do you think?

I’d like to take the chance to point something out: with so many people writing fiction in the modern era, it’s very hard to come up with something completely original. There’s always the chance someone somewhere has thought of something similar first. Still, I’ve learned that the REALLY important things are the DETAILS: things like characters, setting, etc. I’ve seen people take “old” ideas and given them new, interesting spins. Let’s take a look at SS’s ideas:

-The idea of of Cyberspace is of course, old. Basing a mystery on it is better than the usual Cyberpunk setting, tho. In fact, I ALWAYS believed the setting of The Matrix would have made more sense, if instead of people being put in it by the machines to use as batteries (which makes no sense since biological energy without sunlight would NOT last) people had invented the Matrix and put themselves on it WILLINGLY (to live false lives) only to have sentient machines secretly take over by reprogramming people into forgetting it wasn’t real. (This would also explain why the 20th century-like setting was chosen- in the movie, it was justified by saying that “people can’t accept perfection” (Pfft!!) Hey Spaz- maybe something like that is going on in your story?

-The mystery disappearances are indeed an interesting topic… not much written about those, that I know. I have heard of “Phantoms” but haven’t seen it (the movie or the book) yet (but I knew about the blob.) Gotta do it someday. Of course, the “everybody vanishes but you” idea has been done before, but again, with a more original explanation, it would be worth playing. (Say, you people remember that book last year, about God taking away all the Worthy people and abandoning the rest of humanity? Very controversial, but at least it was original (as a story, I mean, not doctrine). I hear it’s being made into a movie, btw.

I like the first idea! The virtual world should be made by Microsoft.

Oh, get outta here. Uh, anyway … What kind of sprites are you gonna use?

You definately have interesting ideas, Spazz. Very interesting indeed.

If you’re not sure what to go with, then just think about it for awhile…think about which ones you think you can actually do.

Before I started writing that fantasy story of mine, I had several ideas…but only one of them that I could actually get onto the paper, so to speak.

So if you can, DO! Like I said, interesting ideas, and I would LOVE to see either one of them put into action. Good luck with whitchever you may choose.

(Yar, can i Borrow 2000? She’s cute! (Nutter curses!))

Yo, Bloke with the Cat!

The Frist one, echos the Matrix, if you do it, could be a good one or a “duffer”.

No. 2. I have no idea. got to see it more.

BTW: i got 2 ideas for story that I can do in short story.

  1. KH type game, With Time traveling in. the Cast is about 10 Heros/Heroines. ( Iwas plaing too much Chrono Trigger before i started.) Just with the note It could end up a novel.

  2. Movie, a futuristic space adventure with ships that talk one or to in to flesh. I got a series of important plot headings.

Big Nutter
Only one (or three) name(s) for story 1.

Yar doesn’t even HAVE anything with Windows 2000.

Klatu Verda Nicto!

Pants - Didn’t work

Big Nutter
(I’m not sure if it’s right!)

Meh.
It has been done.

But that doesn’t mean it can’t be done again.

Please, for the love of god, the world doesn’t need another web comic

The game sounds pretty neat though, im not sure how you’d go about making it though.

Much less a sprite comic. If you want to start, go ahead, nobody’s stopping you, but please don’t advertise, or mention it ever again here >>;

What has been done? the Silly Quote? Spirte comic? or both?

Big Nutter
Yup to all above.

Sounds like a head trip to me…I’ve got enough to deal with already.

I used to be (and still am) opposed to anime-for-the-hell-of-it, i.e. refusal to admit the possibility that something’s bad just because it’s anime, but that doesn’t mean I hate anime in general (unlike my sister). I prefer, thus, to take the opposite stance of Cless and BMO: I’m going to wait and see if it’s good or bad, before unilaterally decrying it just because it’s a webcomic or spritecomic.

I know how many shitty spritecomics are out there, but with the ritght person behind them, decent spritecomics CAN be done. (Hell, Yar has done it. :wink: )

Bob and George and 8-Bit Theater aren’t the only spritecomics worth reading.
Captain SNES (captainsnes.keenspace.com) Patchwork Heroes (yeti.keenspace.com) and Secret of Mana Theater (www.manatheater.com) are some damn good examples of sprites done right.

All is i can add, is have a go and until with some stuff still to go, i’ll say:

That smells worser than on of my farts.

And Beleave me they really stink! He’s already got rid of the Windows Girls.

Eww! That is horible.

Big Nutter

My comic is about a sprite who has a vaccum cleaner

<img src=http://www.angelfire.com/hero/bluemageone/asukaa.gif>I have a vaccum, what an insane world we live in

<img src=http://www.angelfire.com/hero/bluemageone/kojiro.gif>I am a robot samurai from the future here to kill you!

<img src=http://www.angelfire.com/hero/bluemageone/herodown.gif>Dont worry! I, a hero from an unpopular final fantasy, will save you!

<img src=http://www.angelfire.com/hero/bluemageone/kojiro.gif>Alas, my robot samurai power is no match for your spikey hair or blue armor

<img src=http://www.angelfire.com/hero/bluemageone/asukaa.gif>swoon I am in love with you Hero from an unpopular final fantasy, i want to have hundreds of your babies! swoon

<img src=http://www.angelfire.com/hero/bluemageone/herodown.gif>sweatdrop Oh what an insane world we live in! sweatdrop

I figure i’ll just milk the series untill i have enough money to retire to a remote island in microasia.

Let’s see … so far, we have fart jokes, and then utter randomness.

Sounds like standard spritecomic fare to me! :smiley:

Yarr. Yar, consider the fact that quite many of your characters represented are in some anime or another. Now, you hate either the concept and love the characters, or you’re just a closet anime fan. That’s who I see it. Of course… did I make any sense now?

Fart jokes are the WindyTWIT’s speciality. Me, just a bit of randomness.

Did Someone mentions my Name, Nutter?

Big Nutter

It is of my opinion that we don’t need any more webcomics, unless yours will be the 1% goodness that rises above the rest of the crap.