Constructive critisism on my fic except the first few chapters which suck.

I would just like to ask any other writers who have played FF8 to please read my fic and comment on it. And yes, I do know that the first three or four chapters are probably the worst bit of fanfiction on this site but after that it get’s better. It’s incomplete at the moment, but it’s heading toward the end, getting progressively darker as it goes on :too bad: . Anyway, I know where I want to go, but I wouldn’t mind hearing if anyone else had any ideas where it could go. Thanks :enguard: .

Umm, maybe I’m slow, but I don’t see any sign of a fanfic. Do you have a link, or could you post it, or sumtin?

The Gods’ Other Half
There you go :slight_smile:

Thanks Weiila. Forgot to mention it was in the fanfic section. Damn. Slams head against wall Sorry.