# And Forever (poem)

**URL:** <https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/t/and-forever-poem/15455>\
**Category:** Media Forum\
**Created:** [October 30, 2005, 4:38pm UTC](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/t/and-forever-poem/15455 "2005-10-30T16:38:25Z")\
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**Author:** ![Cavelcade](https://discourse-cdn.rpgclassics.com/user_avatar/discourse.rpgclassics.com/cavelcade/32/84_2.png) [@Cavelcade](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/u/Cavelcade)\
**Post date:** [October 30, 2005, 4:38pm UTC](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/t/and-forever-poem/15455/1 "2005-10-30T16:38:25Z")

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And Forever

A love so clear,  
It brings me to tears,  
No-one but you,  
Can make this so true.

It’s like nothing,  
Nothing I could sing,  
You’ve brought me joy,  
Unbecoming of the boy.

I doubt I’ll know,  
How you’ve made it so,  
Brought me from dark  
To a place beyond light.

All I’ll ever crave,  
I know you will have,  
My beauty you are,  
My dreams you enter.

And forever…  
And forever…  
And forever…  
I love you.

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**Author:** ![Arac](https://discourse-cdn.rpgclassics.com/user_avatar/discourse.rpgclassics.com/arac/32/95_2.png) [@Arac](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/u/Arac)\
**Post date:** [October 31, 2005, 7:50pm UTC](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/t/and-forever-poem/15455/2 "2005-10-31T19:50:43Z")

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The only things I would change are the use of ‘joy’ twice in the poem; twice isn’t enough to really give the feeling of reference-type intentional repetition throughout a poem, but it is used twice, which makes it feel repetetive.  
Other than that though, this is a very good, straight-forward love song that feels like it could be either new or very traditional.

It has a very Irish feel, as well, like a Seamus Heaney, W. B. Yeats love song.

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**Author:** ![Cavelcade](https://discourse-cdn.rpgclassics.com/user_avatar/discourse.rpgclassics.com/cavelcade/32/84_2.png) [@Cavelcade](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/u/Cavelcade)\
**Post date:** [November 1, 2005, 11:01am UTC](https://discourse.rpgclassics.com/t/and-forever-poem/15455/3 "2005-11-01T11:01:16Z")

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Yeah, I changed that joy pretty much straight away, I just forgot to change it here.  
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